Question

书面表达（共1小题，计15分）

假设你是Tony,今年寒假要去参加由市共青团组织的赴澳大利亚“绿色之旅” 冬令营（winter camp）活动。请你根据一些提示，写一篇在开营式上的自我介绍。介绍必须包含要点提示，可适当拓展。要求词数在70-80之间，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

要点提示：

1. 英文名字（Tony），来自中国杭州, 出生于1998年。(was born in 出生于)

2. 经常锻炼。每天吃水果蔬菜，喝牛奶；很少吃垃圾食品

3. 学校离家两公里；骑自行车上学

4. 与好朋友Tom比较：Tom比你高，比你文静；你更外向。

5. 你打算：努力学习，取得好成绩

Answer

One possible version：

I’m very glad to introduce myself to all of you. My English name is Tony. I was born in 1998. I live in Hangzhou, a very beautiful city. I’m very healthy, because I often exercise. Another reason is that I have a healthy eating habit. I eat vegetables and fruit every day, and I also drink milk. I hardly ever eat junk food.

I go to school by bike with my friend Tom. It’s only two kilometers from our home to school. Oh, Tom is my good friend, he’s taller and quieter than me, but I’m more outgoing.

I’m going to be a teacher when I grow up. For this reason, I’m going to work hard and get good grades.

I feel lucky to join you. I hope that we can be good friends. That’s all. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，在夏令营开营式上介绍自己。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I’m very glad to…；Another reason is that…；It’s only two kilometers…；I hope that…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意情景是在开营式上，结尾要表示感谢。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表达很高兴介绍自己，接下来介绍自己的基本情况、生活习惯、学习情况和计划，最后表达感谢和希望交朋友的愿望。此处短语be glad to, from…to…; grow up和 get good grades的运用以及表语从句Another reason is that I have a healthy eating habit.也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。