Question

作文（10分）

假如你是Tom，你的朋友Daming喜欢英语，不过在学习中遇到了一些问题，需要帮助，请给他几条学英语的建议。（词数在60词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）

Dear Daming,

I’m Tom. I am a middle school student in Grade Two. I know you have some problems in learning English. Now I can give you some advice on improving English.

Yours,

Tom.

Answer

Dear Daming,

I’m Tom. I am a middle school student in Grade Two. I know you have some problems in learning English. Now I can give you some advice on improving English.

To learn English ,you should preview the day’s lesson before class and try to find the main ideas to reply to the teacher’s questions. In class , you should make notes carefully . You should often read a passage and retell it yourself. You should learn English grammar and it helps you a lot. When you can’t remember new words ,you should write them down in a notebook and take it with you . Reading a good English newspaper is helpful. You should speak English with your teachers ,your classmates and even with foreigners. You should insist on speaking English every day.

In these ways, I have improved my English skills. I hope these can help you with your English.

Yours,

Tom.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。本文给出了话题，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语来表达，适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文多次使用情态动词should为对方提建议；也使用了一些句型如You should insist on speaking English every day，这些都为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.

考点：话题作文。