Question

书面表达（满分15分）

Jack是一名九年级的学生，最近迷上手机游戏，经常玩到深夜，睡眠不足，不能认真听讲，导致成绩下降。妈妈很生气，不再让他使用手机。假如你是他的朋友Tina，请你写一封信给他，建议他要合理使用手机，如查阅资料，记单词等。同时，考试在即，要理解父母、老师的心情，要主动去沟通，得到他们的原谅和帮助。

要求：

包含所给要点，语言流畅，意思连贯，适当拓展；词数80词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：become poor in study; get angry with ; communicate with; forgive.

Dear Jack，

I am sorry to hear that you quarreled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.

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Yours

Tina

Answer

Dear Jack，

I am sorry to hear that you quarrelled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.

You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day. Because of these, you became poor in your study. Your mother got angry with you. You felt bad about this.

Firstly, I think you should stop playing games. You can use mobile phone to search for information, and look up new words. it is a useful tool in your study.

Secondly, you need to communicate with your parents and teachers, and let them know your problems. They will help you. at the same time ,they will forgive you for your mistakes.

I hope my suggestions are of great value to you.

Yours，

Tina

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要是作者Tina向朋友Jack关于他玩手机的问题给他提出的建议；温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑 ，文中段落清晰，给作者提供了有力的建议。You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day在本句中用到了spend+时间+doing的结构；try to do表示设法去做某事；另外文中还用到了Firstly；Secondly等表示顺序的单词；这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。