Question

书面表达。（10分）

今天是开学的第一天，老师让每个学生写一篇日记介绍自己，Bill 不太会写，你能根据下面的提示帮帮他吗？（日记开头已写出）

Family name	Smith
Given  name	Bill
Date of birth	12月21日
Age	14
Telephone number	34562188
Color	blue
Fruit	strawberry
Collection	2 tennis rackets,4soccers

Monday                        Nov.28th,2008            Fine

My name is_____________________________________________________________

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Answer

Monday ,Nov.28th,2008 ,Fine

Today was the first day of my new school.My name is Bill Smith.I am 24.My birthday is December 21.My favourite colour is blue.I like strawberries.I have a small collection.I have 2 tennis rackets and 4 soccers.I like sports.My telephone number is 34562188.

【解析】

试题分析：本文叙述了Bill的一篇日记，注意日记的格式，因为本文是介绍自己的平时的爱好，所以句子的时态基本用一般现在时，要注意上下文的衔接，适当用一些连词。不要遗漏要点。

【亮点说明】本文用了一些短语和句式，如：the first day of my new school，December 21，My favourite colour is blue等，短文用了连词and。

考点：提纲作文。