Question

书面表达13分(其中3分为书写分，同学们一定要认真书写哦！)

亲爱的同学们，经过一学期的学习，我们认识了阳光中学的米莉，艾米，丹尼尔等新朋友。现在你想把丹尼尔介绍给你的笔友李雷，请根据以下提示，写一篇80字左右的英语短文。

年龄	13
外貌	短发，戴眼镜
爱好	玩电脑游戏，擅长数学
个性	善良而乐于助人。经常为老人们打扫他们的公寓
生活方式	喜欢汉堡包和可乐。他们不健康。他想要改变他的生活方式。计划吃更多的水果和蔬菜并每周去游泳一次。
衣着	常穿运动服和运动鞋，因为他们轻便舒适。
节日	最喜欢的节日是春节。因为他喜欢燃放烟花; ---(帮助他再自由发挥一点喜欢春节的理由)

注意：1. 短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，80词左右。

2. 短文开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Li Lei

I would like to introduce(介绍) my best friend Daniel to you.

Do you want to be friends with him? Please write back to me soon.

Yours

ΧΧΧ

Answer

Dear Li Lei,

I would like to introduce(介绍) my best friend Daniel to you.

Daniel is thirteen years old. He lives in Suzhou, Jiangsu. He is a student of Sunshine Middle School. He is a tall boy with short hair. He wears glasses. He is polite and helpful. He studies very hard. His favourite subject is math.He likes swimming and playing computer games. He often helps the old people do the cleaning in their houses at the weekend. He likes hamburgers and Coco because they are unhaelthy.He doesn’t want to be like this.He wants to eat more vegetables and fruit.And he plans to go swimming once a month.He likes sports clothes and shoes because they are comfortable.He likes the Spring Festival best because he likes setting off fireworks.He likes shopping during the festival. Messi is his favourite football player. Messi is his hero!He wants to be a football player when he grows up.

Do you want to be friends with him? Please write back to me soon.

Yours

ΧΧΧ

【解析】

试题分析：短文是一封信，所以一定要符合信的格式，本文是介绍Daniel的情况，所以句子的主语应该用第三人称单数，因为是介绍Daniel的平时的情况，所以句子的时态应该用一般现在时。要注意不要遗漏要点，要适当用一些连词。要注意上下文之间的衔接。

【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和句式，如：He is a tall boy with short hair. He often helps the old people do the cleaning in their houses at the weekend. He wants to eat more vegetables and fruit. And he plans to go swimming once a month等。用了一些连词如：because，and等，使句子结构复杂化了，增加了文章的色彩。

考点：提纲类短文。