Question

书面表达（15分）

假设你叫李涛，你的美国朋友David想要在中国结交更多的朋友。你通过电子邮件，把你的同学章恬介绍给他。章恬情况见下表：

性   别	女
年   龄	14
外   貌	圆脸，大眼睛，长的直发，和我差不多高；
个   性	勤劳，诚实，从不说他人坏话； 有爱心，经常帮助需要帮助的人和动物；
爱   好	痴迷于DIY，上周她送了一个十字绣（cross-stitch）给我作为生日礼物；
春节计划	去盐城观察丹顶鹤（red-crowned crane）并写一篇关于丹顶鹤的报告。

要求：1. 注意文章条理，语句通顺；

2. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Zhang Tian to you.

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I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Maybe you can show him around your country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes

Yours,

Li Tao

Answer

Dear David,

How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Zhang Tianyou.

She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a round face, big eyes and long straight hair. She is as tall as me. She is diligent and honest.She never speaks ill of others;she is always helping other people and animals that need help. She is interested in DIY. Last week she gave me a cross stitch as a birthday gift.

She is planning to Yan Cheng and visit the red-crowned cranes and she wants to write a report about the red-crowned cranes.

I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Maybe you can show him around your country at the Spring Festival.

Best wishes,

Yours,

Li Tao

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者用英文写篇介绍朋友的文章。小作者把列举的提纲都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者写的这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如 She is diligent and honest.She never speaks ill of others;she is always helping other people and animals that need help. She is interested in DIY. Last week she gave me a cross stitch as a birthday gift.

考点：考查提纲类作文。