Question

书面表达（10分）

根据下面表格信息，以Mike的身份写一篇短文，介绍一下他一家人三餐喜欢什么。要求：用下表中所给的所有信息，文章连贯； 40词左右。

	breakfast	lunch	dinner
	eggs	hamburgers	chicken	tomatoes	carrots	salad
Mike	√		√	√		√
Father	√	√		√	√
Mother		√	√		√

Answer

There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and me. Here are some hobbies of us. For breakfast, I like eggs, my father likes eggs and hamburgers, and my mother likes hamburgers. For lunch , I like chicken and tomatoes, my father likes tomatoes, and my mother likes chicken. At dinner, I eat salad only, my father and mother eat carrots only. How strange we are!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，主要是介绍一家人的饮食特点。故主要用一般现在时态进行写作，写作中注意主谓一致等问题。本文写作内容较为单调，写作中注意变换句式，以避免单纯的重复同一句型。

【亮点说明】本文虽然内容较为单调，但是作者巧妙的加上了一些承上启下的句子，如：Here are some hobbies of us.和结尾的How strange we are!使得本文更加肌肉丰满，符合逻辑关系。同时，将句型中的目的状语For breakfast,巧妙提前，将for dinner改为at dinner避免了同一句式的多次重复，使得本文不失为一篇上等作文。

考点：提纲类作文