Question

书面表达（15分）

假如你是Li Ming，本周末班里举行英语角活动，用英语讨论游泳安全问题。请你用英语写一篇简单发言稿。要点如下：

1、游泳有益健康；但有些地方不太安全；

2、不要独自到江河游泳；应有家人或朋友陪伴；

3、游泳前做好准备工作，不要仓促下水；

4、游泳时相互关照；时间不要太长。

5、写1—2点个人建议。

要求：1、词数60—80，发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2、参考词汇：keep fit 有益健康    look after关照   in a hurry仓促

Fellow students,

_______________                                             ________

_______________                                             ________

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Thank s.

Answer

Fellow students, I’m glad to tell you something about my study and everyday life.

Li Ming is good at his lessons and his favorite subject is English. He is friendly to others and willing to help others. He always has many things to do in the spare time. And he has his own hobbies. He likes to surf the internet to get what he wants. He likes music very much. I think we should learn from Li Ming. Students should study hard and also enjoy life out of class.

Thank s.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如He likes to surf the internet to get what he wants.等，I think等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲类作文。