Question

在“八礼四仪”教育活动中，同学们收获很大，尤其是李伟同学。请你根据下表内容写一篇英语短文，叙述李伟在活动前后的表现。词数在100词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

	In the past	At the moment
Li Wei	come to school late quarrel with others make noise in class throw rubbish everywhere	come to school early be friendly to others listen to the teachers carefully help collect rubbish
Your advice

I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress. ______________________________________________________

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Answer

I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress. In the past, he often came to school late. He used to quarrel with his classmates. He made a lot of noise in class. Sometimes he played computer games too much. His parents and teachers all worried about him. They talked with him patiently.

Now, he has changed a lot. He comes to school on time. He is friendly to his classmates. He listens to the teachers carefully in class. He often helps collect the rubbish with other students. He can finish his homework on time. All the teachers and classmates like him very much.

I hope our class will organize more activities. Our classmates will take part in them actively. We will certainly be more helpful, more friendly and more skillful.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如He often helps collect the rubbish with other students. We will certainly be more helpful, more friendly and more skillful.等，I hope等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。