Question

假定你是你校英语报的小记者，以下两幅图展现了发生在刘林家的生活场景，请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。

内容要求：

1. 简要描述两幅图的内容；

2. 概述你对两幅图的理解；

3. 说明两幅图对你的启示。

        

When Liu Lin was four, …         Twenty years later, …

注意：

1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

It happened in Liu Lin’s family. _______________________________________________

Answer

It happened in Liu Lin’s family. Twenty years ago, when Liu Lin was a child, his mother helped him wash his feet every day. Twenty years later, Liu Lin grew into a young man. Now he helps his mother to wash her feet every day.

What do the pictures tell us? On one hand, when we were young, our parents devoted themselves to taking care of us. On the other hand, we should always remember what our parents have done for us. When they are growing older, they need our love and care as well. Therefore, it is important for us to pay our parents back after we grow up.

In my family, my parents also give me great love and care every day. I love my parents from the bottom of my heart. Thus, I will learn from Liu Lin to do something for my parents from now on.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求看图，简要描述图中内容， 概述对图的理解，说明图给人们的启示。一是要求能对图中所展现的事实讲述清楚，讲述过去的事件，主要运用一般过去时态进行表达；二是通过对两副图内容的联系，讲述了爱的传承的道理，使故事在图画的基础上升华。文章重点讲述两副图上的事实，同时也得要提示主题，点睛之笔必不可少。

写作亮点：这篇短文重点突出，详略得当：第一自然段，短短几句话，把图中的内容完整地表达出来了；第二自然段，用on the one hand…on the other hand讲述图画告诉人们的道理，最后以therefore表达作者的观点。第三自然段，联系自已的实际，说出了自己的想法，将文中的好的做法加以发扬。

考点：图画作文。