Question

书面表达 (共1小题，计15分)

我们的家乡盐城，是一座美丽的城市，请你根据英文提示，以 “The seasons in Yancheng”

为题，写一篇英语短文。

Spring	1．windy and bright, a perfect time to fly kites 2.  play among flowers
Summer	3.  hot, like eating ice cream 4.  play by the quiet streams or under the trees
Autumn	5. fall into piles 6. go on a trip at the weekend, enjoy the beauty of…
Winter	7. drop below zero, be frozen 8. like making snowmen, use carrots for… 9. ……(自由发挥)

要求：1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；

3、词数：80左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）

The seasons in Yancheng

I like the seasons in my hometown Yancheng.                      _______

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Answer

One possible version：

The seasons in Yancheng

I like the seasons in my hometown Yancheng. There are four seasons here. Every season is different but popular.

It is windy and bright in spring, so it is a perfect time to fly kite. With many flowers blooming, people play among flowers, singing, painting, taking photos. It is hot in summer, so people like eating ice cream. Some people play by the quiet streams or under the trees. And it is cool and sunny in autumn, the trees turn yellow and fall into piles. People often go on a trip at the weekend to enjoy the beauty of nature. It is cold and frozen in winter , and the degrees drop below zero. However, it is kids’ favorite season. They like making snowmen using carrots for their noses. Whenever you come to Yancheng, you will like to stay here. Welcome to Yancheng!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的家乡盐城的四季。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It is..., so it is a perfect time to..., so people like....以及the trees turn yellow ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意按照春夏秋冬的顺序来叙述，符合逻辑关系，注意充分利用提纲中所列词汇。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢家乡盐城的季节，接下来介绍春夏秋冬这四个季节，盐城的天气和景色，最后邀请你到盐城来。此处take photos, under the trees, go on a trip, like doing sth, welcome to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。