Question

书面表达（20分）

假如你是Jimmy, 你的朋友Tom想知道关于体育考试的情况。请你写信向他介绍一些关于刚刚过去的体育考试的情况，并给他一些如何通过考试的建议，字数100左右。开头和结尾已经给你写好，下面信息供你参考，请合理运用并适当发挥：

体育考试很重要。它包括长跑（long- distance running）、跳绳（rope skipping）、打排球以及跳远（long jump）等等。起初，你们遇到种种问题：有人跑不到终点就累倒在地，还有人根本不知道怎么打排球。

为了通过考试，你建议他：

1. 每天练习长跑。可以每天跑远一点，每次比前一次快一点，这样可以----

2. 每节课练习打排球，不能取得好成绩的时候，可以-----

3. 锻炼很重要，但是也要保护好自己免受伤害。

4. 考试前要充分休息，适当饮水，少吃含有脂肪的食物。心情要----

Dear Tom,

Let me tell you something about the PE exam. ___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________

Wish you good luck!

Yours

Jimmy

Answer

Let me tell you something about the PE exam. The exam is very important. It includes the long-distance running, rope skipping, playing volleyball and the long jump. At first, we had many problems. Some of us were so tired that they lay on the ground before reaching the finishing line, and some didn’t know how to play volleyball at all.

Here are some suggestions for you to pass the exam. First, you can practise the long-distance running every day. Run a little farther and faster every day, then you can make progress little by little. Second, practise playing volleyball in every PE class. If you can not play very well, teachers will teach you some skills.

Training is important, but don’t forget to protect yourselves. Before the exam, you need to rest enough, drink some water, eat less food with fat. And you should also keep yourself in a good mood.

Wish you good luck!

Yours

Jimmy

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求按所给的提纲，介绍一些关于刚刚过去的体育考试的情况，并给他一些如何通过考试的建议。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文分为两部分，一是过去的体考情况，用一般过去时态；二是对考试的建议，用一般现在时，情态动词，祈使句等等。

写作亮点：本范文条理清晰，层次分明，叙述清楚：全文主要内容分3个自然段，第一自然段写体考；第二自然段也建议；第三自然段写注意事项。每一自然段开头都写了一个总写的句子，像第一自然段的：Let me tell you something about the PE exam.第二自然段的Here are some suggestions for you to pass the exam. 同时，文中所有的first, second…，更使得本文结构层次井然。

考点：考查提纲类短文写作。