Question

学校广播站正在征稿，请按以下要求用英文写一篇广播稿。

要求 ：（1）描述三年中令你难忘的一节课（包括这节课中令你难忘的活动、事件发生的过程）；

（2）谈谈你的感受或评价。

注意： （1）60词左右； （2）文中不能出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。

Answer

An Unforgettable Lesson

I've had many lessons in my school life. The most unforgettable is the one that was given by an American young man.

It was on Tuesday morning in March. A sunny young man came into our classroom, with a big smile on his face. He greeted us in English and then began his class. He was not serious at all. During his class, he neither taught us English grammar rules nor asked us to do lots of written exercises. He just played games with us, taught us several English songs and helped us act out a conversation. When it was my turn to show, I was too nervous to say a word. He smiled at me and told me I could do it. With his help, I played the conversation with my partner at last. I was really encouraged. He taught me the most important lesson of my life: to believe in myself.

Happy time always flies! The class was over. We took a photo with him in the classroom. This lesson was quite different from those we had before. I will never forget his smile, his songs and everything he had done in his class.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为提纲类作文，要求按要求用英文写一篇广播稿。写作提纲已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必根据提纲把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如He was not serious at all. During his class, he neither taught us English grammar rules nor asked us to do lots of written exercises. He just played games with us, taught us several English songs and helped us act out a conversation. We took a photo with him in the classroom. This lesson was quite different from those we had before.定语从句The most unforgettable is the one that was given by an American young man. I will never forget his smile, his songs and everything he had done in his class.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。

考点：话题类作文