Question

书面表达。（15分）

Tom 最近遇到了难题，他给某医学杂志的专栏作者Jenny 写了一封信，以寻求帮助。

Dear Jenny, I was a very good student before, but these days I can’t follow my teachers at school. I’m very worried about my lessons. I’m always under too much pressure(压力). Now I can’t sleep well at night. I don’t know what I should do. Can you help me? Thanks a lot. Yours, Tom

根据信件内容及下列所给提示，帮Jenny 给Tom 写一封回信。

词数要求：80词左右。

提示：

1.向老师和父母求助，让他们在学习上给予帮助；

2.尽量放松，不要考虑太多；

3.睡前做些运动；

4.在床上听一些轻音乐。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,                                                                 Jenny

Answer

Dear Tom,

I'm sorry to know what happened to you. I know you have much pressure on your study. I can give you advice. First, when you have trouble, you'd better ask your teachers and parents, they can give you much help. Second, try to relax yourself, you don't need to worry too much. Third, if you can't sleep well at night, you can do some exercise before you go to bed. Fourth, you can listen some soft music on the bed. It can also help you have a good sleep.

Yours,

Jenny

【解析】

试题分析：本文要写的材料比较具体，主要是给汤姆四条建议。我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文是书信体，主要是一般现在时态，要用好表示建议的句子。例如: you’d better…, you can, you should, 等。

写作亮点：这篇短文层次分明，内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。如：you'd better ask your teachers …, if you can't sleep well at night, you can do…, you don't need to…,等。

考点：提纲作文。