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书面表达(本题共10分) 根据提示写一篇60词左右的短文,介绍林涛和王军星期天的...

书面表达(本题共10分)

根据提示写一篇60词左右的短文,介绍林涛和王军星期天的活动。可适当增加细节。

1. 林涛和王军是好朋友;

2. 今天是星期天,他们不去上学,他们去动物园;

3. 从他们住的居民楼到动物园有10公里,所以他们坐公共汽车去;

4. 动物园里动物真多,他们玩得很高兴。

 

 

 

 

Lin Tao and Wang Jun are good friends. They are often together when they are free. Today is Sunday. They didn’t go to school. They went to the zoo. It’s about ten kilometers away from their home to the zoo, so they went there by bus. There were many animals in the zoo, such as tigers, bears, lions, wolves, monkeys and many other animals. Of all the animals, they liked moneys best. They were very clever and interesting. They were very happy to see so many animals. They had a good time today! 【解析】 试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据题目中给出的提示写一篇短文,介绍林涛和王军星期天的活动。题目中给出了详细的信息,我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容翻译出来,使用正确的词汇和语法,并且符合英语的表达规范。通过分析可知,这篇短文记叙的是已经发生过的事情,因此我们应该使用一般过去时态,特别要注意每句话的谓语动词形式,都要用过去式,注意不规则动词过去式形式的变化。写作时,除了内容的完整,语句的通顺,我们还应使用一些好的句型,增强文章的表现力,使短文表达更加流畅。 写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文中使用了正确的人称和时态,尤其是注意了动词过去式形式的变化。开头两句话是介绍林涛和王军的基本情况的,作者使用的是一般现在时态,具体记叙星期天的活动时,作者使用了一般过去时态。其次作者的叙述非常有条理,内容也很完整,没有遗漏要点。语句也很通顺,符合英语的表达需要。最后作者还使用了一些好的句式,如It’s about ten kilometers away from their home to the zoo, so they went there by bus.、There were many animals in the zoo, such as tigers, bears, lions, wolves, monkeys and many other animals、They were very happy to see so many animals. They had a good time today!等。这些短语和句型的使用使整篇短文更加连贯、流畅。 考点:提纲类作文。  
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