Question

书面表达（15分）

最近，我们对某中学1000名学生进行一次问卷调查，了解他们对未来梦想职业的选择情况。请你根据以下图示内容及写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。

要点：1.描述图示调查结果；

2.阐述你的梦想职业及原因；

3.简述你将如何去实现梦想。

注意：1.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校；

3.词数90左右。

参考词汇：percent 百分比

Recently, a survey of 1000 students’ dream jobs has been made in a school.

Answer

Recently, a survey of 1000 students’ dream jobs has been made in a school. The students have different dreams. Nearly half of them dream of becoming doctors. Thirty percent of the students are interested in teaching, and fifteen percent of them want to be office workers. Besides, a few of them have other choices.

As for me, I'd like to be a doctor. It's the duty of doctors to treat people who are ill and save their lives. What's more, doctors are highly respected. At present, I'll try my best to study well and help others when necessary. I'm sure I'll achieve my dream as long as I keep on working hard.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求根据图表内容和提示写一份调查报告，要求说明调查结果，阐述自己的梦想职业及原因，简述如何实现自己的梦想。要认真读图，准确地生成调查结果分析报告，这部分用一般现在时态，用第三人称形式；阐述自己的梦想职业也用一般现在时，第一人称形式；简述如何实现梦想可以用一般将来时态。短文要表达的内容较多，要注意句子的结构和语句的选择，把词数控制在90词左右，同时要注意突出重点，把握中心。

写作亮点：本范文第一段是学生问卷调查结果报告，针对图表事实，叙述清楚，dream of doing sth, be interested in doing sth, want to be等结构运用恰当；第二段写自己的梦想及原因，以及如何实现自己的梦想。语言简明扼要，表达明了。文中的定语从句，宾语从句，it’s duty of sb to do sth, 等等使本文显得生动具体。

【考点定位】 考查图表类作文。