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假如你刚从英国回来，你的英语老师要求你在课堂上谈谈两国学生的差异。根据下面内容写一篇发言稿

英国学生	搭校车或骑自行车上学；放学后清理花园，照顾宠物等；打零工赚钱
中国学生	由家长接送上学；放学后只学习，不做家务；父母提供零花钱
你的想法	……

注意：1、文章要包含全部内容，可适当增加细节

2、至少提出两点你的想法

3、字数80---100

Hello， everyone! I’m glad to be here to talk about some differences between English students and Chinese students.In England，

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Hello， everyone! I’m glad to be here to talk about some differences between the English students and the Chinese students.In England， the students are very independent.They go to school by bus or by bike and after school they offer to clean the garden.At home， they take care of the animals every day.To my surprise， they are hardworking in the factory because they can make money.

But in China， the students are different from those in England.They go to school in their parents’ cars.After school they only do their homework .And at home they never do the housework.Their parents provide them with money.

I think students should be independent.They should share housework with their parents and make a little money by doing chores as much as possible.They shouldn’t depend on their parents too much.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，要求我们根据所给信息写一篇发言稿。谈谈两国学生的差异。首先要根据表格，比较两国学生的上学方式，以及放学后学生在家的一些日常生活行为。由于是介绍，应该用一般现在时态来描述。写作时，按照写作要求，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排，最后加上自己的观点，至少两点。

亮点说明：这篇发言稿写的非常成功。作者思路清晰，语言丰富，文中包含了材料中的所有内容，但不是逐句翻译，加上一些连词，使文章的意思衔接更自然。使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。In England, to my surprise， they are hardworking in the factory because they can make money.In China, their parents provide them with money.形成鲜明对照。最后一段，作者认识到中国学生的不足之处，并提出了自己的建议，少依靠父母，学会独立，具有号召力，符合发言稿的特点。

考点：考查材料作文