Question

书面表达。 (15分)

以“My friend Tom”为题，写一篇短文，不少于60个词。请充分发挥你的想象力，使短文的语言流畅.连贯。

1. 汤姆是一个好学生。他13岁，高而瘦并戴着眼镜的男孩子。他乐意助人，昨天他帮助了迈克数学。

2. 汤姆勤奋学习，各门功课都好。 他数学和英语学得最好。他每天早晨读英语和语文。

3. 他很健康，他经常吃健康食品并一周锻炼三次。他也喜欢打篮球和游泳。

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Answer

My best friend is Tom. He is a good student. He’s 13 years old. He is both tall and thin. He usually wears small and round glasses. He is always ready to help others. Yesterday he helped Mike to learn English. Tom is a hard-working boy, he does well in all his subjects, especially English and math. He reads English and Chinese every morning. Tom is very healthy, he often eats healthy food and exercises three times a week. And he also likes playing basketball and swimming.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求以My friend Tom为题，根据所给要点写一篇60词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般现在时态书写，只有一个一般过去时态的句子。可以用第三人称。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，并且要围绕主题适当发挥。

写作亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了自己的朋友Tom，结构清晰，要点全面。一个一般过去时态的句子把握的也比较准确。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。He is always ready to help others. Tom is a hard-working boy, he does well in all his subjects, especially English and math.

考点：提纲类作文。