Question

某报社正在就“The person who I admire most”为题进行征文比赛。假设你的阿姨对你的学习生活影响非常大，你非常钦佩她。请你根据表格提供的有关阿姨的信息和要求写一篇文章向该报社投稿。.

职业	公司经理	年龄	四十几岁
品质	有条理	从不忘记她需要做的事
勤奋	熬夜，做额外的工作
乐于助人	献血(donate blood)好几次；请再举一例。
最爱的颜色	绿色	象征……
对我的帮助	倾听我的烦恼；告诉我不要放弃；…… (请自己再发挥一条)

注意：1. 开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2. 词数不少于90字左右，可以根据要求作适当发挥。

The person who I admire most

I would like to talk about my aunt I admire most.

Answer

I would like to talk about my aunt I admire most.She is a manager .Now she is in her forties .She is a person with great patience, and she never forgets the things she has to do.She is very diligence.She always stays up late and does the extra work. More importantly, She is always ready to help others.She often looks after old people in Old People’s Home.She has ever donated her blood for several times.Green is her favorite

color,because it stands for energetic. When I am feeling sad, it is my aunt who listens to me carefully.When I have some difficulties in my studies, it is also my aunt who encourages me not to give up until I solve the problem. I love my aunt.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。题目所给材料内容比较详细，条理清楚，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。