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“平安出行，文明骑车”已成为人们普遍关心的一个社会热门话题，特别作为一名中学生，骑自行车时如何保持安全是非常重要的。请你根据图表中所提示的内容要点用英语写一篇短文。

注意：1.短文的开头已给出，不记入总词数；

2．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

3．内容可适当发挥，并表达你个人的看法；

4．词数90左右。

How can we keep safe when we ride?____________________________________

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Answer

How can we keep safe when we ride? First, we must obey the traffic rules, especially when we cross the road. When the traffic light is red, we must stop. Second, we must wear helmets and have lights on the bicycle when we ride a bike. Third, we shouldn’t ride so fast while riding a bike. Though bicycles are much safer than any other vehicle, sometimes bicycle accidents also happen, so we must be careful. Remember “It’s very important for us to keep safe when we ride.” I hope more and more people can choose to go out by bicycle. It’s not only good for the environment, but also for our own health.

【解析】

试题分析：“平安出行，文明骑车”已成为人们普遍关心的一个社会热门话题。写前考生要认真审题，中学生如何安全骑车是写作的主题。根据图表中所提示的内容要点，可知这里应该用一般现在时来描述，主语用第一人称，要注意上下文之间的衔接。内容可适当发挥，并表达个人的看法。

写作亮点：本文按照写作要求，根据汉语提示，用简洁的语言，准确地表达出汉语意思，语言流畅。本文写作思路清晰，时态运用得当，特别First, Second, Third,的使用，使语意更加连贯，层次分明。并依据要求，提出了自己的希望：I hope more and more people can choose to go out by bicycle. It’s not only good for the environment, but also for our own health. 倡导平安出行，文明骑车

考点：提纲类作文。