Question

书面表达

假设你是李明，根据以下内容，给网友Susan写一封信。

1．常熟是一个有着悠久历史的古老城市，有许多名胜古迹。

2．有许多博物馆、公园和购物中心。

3．上个月邀请了表哥李明来常熟游览。他为人慷慨，有幽默感，喜欢说笑话，但从不说别人的坏话。

4．他说他不能相信自己的眼睛，常熟比以前更现代化，市中心高楼大厦越来越多。

5．他决定将来在常熟生活因为……(请给出一到两个理由)

Answer

Dear Susan,

Changshu is one of the oldest cities in China. It has many places of interest. There are many museums, parks and shopping centers. They make the life in Changshu more comfortable and more colorful.

Last month, I invited my cousin, Li Ming to visit Changshu. He is generous and has a sense of humor. He likes telling jokes, but never says something bad to others. My cousin had a great time here. He said he couldn’t believe his eyes. He thinks Changshu is more modern than before, and there are more and more tall buildings in city center. He decides to live in Changshu in the future. He thinks Changshu is more beautiful than any other city in China.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一封电子邮件，介绍一个注明的旅游城市。材料中给的资料比较全面，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者紧紧围绕提供的几个写作要点，把握写作方向。人称转换及时态把握的都很准确。结构清晰，要点全面。

考点：提纲类作文。