Question

书面表达

你有一位密友Paul，你对他的情况了解得很清楚，根据表格请将你朋友的个人概况向班上其他同学介绍一下。

Personal information	Name:     Paul Age:       15 Animal sign: 兔 Favourite colour: 红色（有助于他做决定） Hobbies: 阅读，听音乐 Personalities ：modest（从不炫耀） curious（喜欢问问题） organized（东西摆放井然有序.）
Problem	1.父母对他的学习严格要求，常熬夜 2.无法在学业和爱好之间取得平衡
Big dream	成为音乐家，帮助架起一座沟通中西方文化的桥梁

要求：

1.词数80左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数）

2.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥。

3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整.

I have a close friend. He is Paul. I know him very well._________________

_________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________

Answer

I have a close friend. His name is Paul. I know him very well.He is 15 years old. His animal sign is rabbit. His favorite color is red. He likes reading and listening to music. He is modest, curious and organized. His parents are strict with him in study. He study hard and he often stays up late. He doesn’t achieve a balance between his school work and his hobbies. He is upset. He is going to be a musician to help build a bridge of communication between Chinese and western culture when he grow up.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。我们应运用正确的熟悉的英语句子写出怎样节的过程。把我们熟悉的素材，要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，最好使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；使用我们熟悉和背过的句型，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，如He is 15 years old. His animal sign is rabbit. His favorite color is red. He likes reading and listening to music. He is modest, curious and organized.应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇如His parents are strict with him in study；to help build a bridge of communication between Chinese and western culture；用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，没有语言错误；字数符合要求。

考点：提纲作文。