Question

书面表达

根据下表提示以My Sister 为题写一篇短文。

要求：1. 语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全，适当拓展。

2. 80个词左右。

基本情况	Amy，13岁，短发，大眼睛,苗条
学习情况	最喜欢的学科是数学 经常帮助同学学习
兴趣爱好	喜欢打排球，听音乐
生活方式	经常吃汉堡、鸡肉和巧克力，但很少吃蔬菜和水果； 她两顿饭之间还吃甜食，很少运动 你对她的这种生活方式的看法 …….

My Sister

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Answer

My Sister

My sister is Amy.She is 13 years old.She has a short hair.She is thin.Her favourite subject is math.Because she often helps her classmates ，her classmates all like her.She also plays volleyball and listens to music.She thinks music makes her relaxed.She often eats hamburgers,chicken and chocolate but she seldom eats vegetables and fruit.She eats sweets between two meals.She hates sports.I think she shouldn’t eat too much sweets because they are bad for her teeth.She should do sports and have a healthy eating.

【解析】

试题分析：本文介绍了自己妹妹的情况，所以句子的主语应该用第三人称单数形式，这里是介绍她平时的情况，所以句子应该用一般现在时，不要遗漏提示中的要点，可以增加适当的内容，用适当的连词。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：Because she often helps her classmates ，her classmates all like her.She also plays volleyball and listens to music.She thinks music makes her relaxed.She often eats hamburgers,chicken and chocolate but she seldom eats vegetables and fruit.She eats sweets between two meals.She hates sports.I think she shouldn’t eat too much sweets because they are bad for her teeth.用了一些连词，如because，but，and等，增加了文章的亮点。

考点：提纲作文。