Question

写作

下周你们班将召开一次题为“互联网的利弊”的主题班会。一些同学认为互联网好处多；一些同学认为互联网不好。请以The Internet 为题，写一篇短文，谈谈互联网的利弊以及我们应该怎样正确对待它。（80字左右）

提示词：shopping, information, music, watch TV, however, hurt, money, spend, carefully

The Internet

The Internet makes our lives more interesting. ________________________

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Answer

The Internet

The Internet makes our lives more interesting. We can do some shopping without leaving our houses. We can use the Internet for looking for a job or selling things. We can watch movies, listen to music and write e-mails on the Internet. However, some people use the Internet to hurt others and try to get money by cheating. Some young people usually spend too much time playing games and so on.

The Internet can change our lives for the better, but we should use it carefully.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文简洁明了，结构紧凑，准确表达了文中给出的信息。并使用了makes our lives more interesting, do some shopping without leaving our houses, use the Internet for looking for job or selling things, however spend too much time playing等短语。在学习中要注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。