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书面表达 假如你叫Liu Hai,请根据所给提示,写一封电子邮件,向你的网友Si...

书面表达

假如你叫Liu Hai,请根据所给提示,写一封电子邮件,向你的网友Simon介绍自己的情况。

姓名

Liu Hai

年龄

13

居住地

盐城

职业

学生

班级

七(6)班

外貌

高个、短发

喜好

1.打篮球,常常和同学在电视上看篮球比赛;

2.听音乐,音乐可以…;

3. 读书,从书中了解世界;

4. 最喜欢万圣节,因为…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3. 读书,从书中了解世界。

偶像

林书豪(Jeremy Lin)

原因

梦想

要求:1. 条理清楚,意思连贯,内容必须包括表格中所有要点;

2. 词数80左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Simon,

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

All the best,

Liu Hai

 

Dear Simon, I am glad to be friends with you. I’d like to introduce myself to you. My name is Liu Hai. I am 13 years old. I live in Yancheng now. I am a student. I am in Class 6, Grade 7. I am tall hand and have short hair. I like playing basketball. I often watch basketball match on TV with my classmates. I also like listening to music. I think it can make me feel relaxed and happy. I like reading. I can learn a lot about the world from books. I like Halloween best because it is a festival of children’s. I can play games with my friends. My idol is Lin Shuhao. He is a great basketball player. He works very hard and can play basketball very well. My dream is to become a basketball player like him. What about you? All the best, Liu Hai 【解析】 试题分析:这篇作文是写给Simon的一封信,要求我们以Liu Hai的身份在信中介绍自己的情况。题目中给出了具体的写作信息,包括姓名、年龄、所在班级、外貌、喜好、偶像和自己的梦想等。其中有些内容是需要我们自己发挥想象力来补充完整的,如梦想。关于介绍人物的文章我们平时接触比较多,因此学生对这一题材是比较熟悉的,写作的时候也会觉得比较得心应手。但是我们仍然要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同,语言、语法要准确,还要注意使用be动词和其他动词的正确形式。为提升作文档次,还需要在文章中使用一些短语和好的句型等,注意语句之间的连接。 写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者根据题目要求和提纲给Simon写信介绍了自己的情况,想和他成为朋友。作文可以分成三个部分,第一部分是自己的基本情况;第二部分是自己的喜好;最后是自己的梦想。这篇短文的层次还是很清楚的,内容也很完整,需要自己补充的内容和短文的衔接也很好;起床这篇作文使用了正确的时态和人称,谓语动词形式准确,符合英语的表达规范。短文中作者也使用了一些好的句型,如I’d like to introduce myself to you、I also like listening to music. I think it can make me feel relaxed and happy.、My dream is to become a basketball player like him等。 考点:提纲类作文。  
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