Question

书面表达

随着“爸爸去哪儿?”等综艺节目的播出，人们越来越意识到爸爸对孩子成长的重要作用。根据近期你校对本校学生的调查，统计出孩子心目中好爸爸的三大优秀品质。请你根据下列表格中的内容，以“What makes a good father?”为题，用英文写一篇短文。

好爸爸的品质	百分比	理    由
1. 多花时间陪孩子	52%	感受到父爱。
2. 以身作则	27%	为孩子树立表率，教会他们诚实、勇敢。
3. 经常赞美孩子	14%	给孩子的一个微笑也是对孩子的赞赏。
请给出2条你认为好爸爸应具有的其他品质，并加以说明。

【写作要求】

1. 对所给要点进行陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译；

2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数；

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名。

What makes a good father?

With the hot Chinese reality show “Where Are We Going, Dad?” broadcast, people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children. From the recent survey of our students, we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have.

Answer

With the hot Chinese reality show “Where Are We Going, Dad?” broadcast, people realize that fathers play an important role in the growth of their children. From the recent survey of our students, we have found that there are three most important qualities that a good father should have. 52% of the students think a good father should spend more time with his children. In this way they’ll feel their father’s love. 27% of the students believe a good father is a good example. He can teach his children to be honest and braver. 14% of the students think a good father should often praise his children because his smiles also suggest his praise.

In my opinion, a good father is also a patient teacher. A good father will listen to his children and give them suggestions if necessary.

【解析】

试题分析：本文应可以用第三人称，一般将来时态和一般现在时态。作者灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：本文叙述条理清晰，行文流畅。语言丰富，句式多样；如：spend...with..., teach sb. to do sth., in one’s opinion等；使用了宾语从句，原因状语从句，条件状语从句等句型。发挥恰当，效果不错。

考点：提纲作文。