Question

书面表达

请围绕怎么保持健康，怎么预防流感（How to Keep Healthy，How to Prevent the Flu)等话题为主题，写一篇80个词左右的短文。

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Answer

How to Keep Healthy

As we know, health is important to us. How should we keep healthy?

First, we should have a good eating habit. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat every day. We can’t eat too much or too little. Drinking enough water is a good habit. Second, we had better go to bed early. We shouldn’t stay up late at night. Third, exercising a lot is good for us. Don’t throw litter about.

If we try to do that, we will be in a good health.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是围绕健康展开叙述，首先应该说明健康的重要性，然后，分别叙述如何才能保持健康。最后，要发出倡议，号召大家保持健康。在写作时，本文的主语主要为第一人称复数人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展。为了使逻辑显得更加清楚,适当使用序数词.

写作亮点：本书面表达的中心是如何才能保持健康，所以作者紧紧围绕题目的提示进行书写。注重了表述的逻辑性和条理性。文章中First, Second, Third,的运用，使语句更加通顺，连贯。时态运用非常准确，且做到了主谓一致，无语法错误。最后一句运用了复合句：If we try to do that, we will be in a good health.加深了主题。

考点：话题类作文。