Question

书面表达

在你的生活中经历很多，如：才艺表演（talent show）、体育比赛（match）、考试（exam）、英语演讲比赛（English speech competition）汉字听写大赛（Chinese dictation competition）或者其它事件等等，请你选择一次给你感想很多或教训很大的事件，用难忘的经历（An unforgettable experience）为题写一篇英语短文，100词左右。

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Answer

An unforgettable experience

Last summer holiday, I learned to swim. It was very unforgettable and interesting. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But father said it didn’t matter and he would protect me. Then I began to swim, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then father told me how to move, how to use my hands and legs. Slowly, I could move a little. In fact, it was not that easy. I learned it for almost half a month. I was excited when father told me I made it.

【解析】

试题分析：本文应可以用第一人称，时态是一般过去时态。作者灵活采用不同的表达方式将事件完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：本文叙述条理清晰，行文流畅。语言丰富，句式多样。如：learn to do, teach sb. to do sth, be afraid of等；使用了时间状语从句、宾语从句等，使文章内容更加衔接，一气呵成，效果不错。

考点：话题作文。