Question

成于勤俭，败于奢侈，这是我们的古人很早就提出来的警世箴言。近日习近平主席针对社会上很多人浪费粮食的现象，发出了“光盘行动”的指示，目的是为了让人们节约粮食、杜绝浪费。节约是一种美德，节约更是一种智慧。请你写一篇以“No Wasting”为题的短文。内容包括：

1．你对“光盘行动”的看法。

2．在生活中你看到了哪些不节俭的行为。

3．列举两件你在生活中所做的有关节俭的事。

4．号召大家参与到节俭活动中来。

作文要求：

1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；

2．语句连贯，词数在80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

No Wasting

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Answer

No Wasting

Ancient people told us that success lies in thrifty while failure lies in luxury. Chairman Xi recently has launched an action called “Empty your plate”, which aims at letting people cherish food and reduce waste.

In my opinion, I support the action, because we really need to know how bad it is to waste food. No wasting, start from myself. In our daily life, we can see different kinds of wasting. For example, some students often forget to turn off the electricity when they leave the classroom. Others even don’t turn off the tap after washing their hands.

As for me, I am trying my best to keep saving. When I go shopping, I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. And I go to school on foot or ride bikes. Besides, I try to recycle the energy in my daily.

In a word, saving is necessary and important. I hope there will be more and more people to start saving from every little thing.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，一共四个要点。第二三个要点主要选取我们能表的的浪费和节约行为，这可以减少错误有利于得分。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：篇短文使用了大量的连词放在句子的开头，使文章逻辑性更强，为文章增色不少。如:

In my opinion,在我看来，As for me,至于我，.In a word,总而言之。For example,例如，Besides,除了……还有等学习中注意总结,灵活运用连词，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：提纲作文。