Question

书面表达。

请根据表格中所给的提示，写一篇短文介绍你的网友Mike。

要求：1) 字数在80左右，不得出现真实校名和姓名。

2）文中须包括所有提示的内容，每个方面都可适当加以想象发挥。

基本信息	14岁，高个子，戴眼镜，在七年级（3）班 尖子生，最喜欢的学科是……
生活和饮食	每天6点半起床，步行上学… … 常吃 / 从不吃 / 很少吃…… 每周锻炼……  （给出合理建议）
爱好	擅长……；是……的一员
梦想	成为一名……

My online friend

I have an online friend. His name is Mike._____________________________________________

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Answer

My online friend

I have a online friend. His name is Mike. He is 14 years old. He is very tall and wears glasses. He is in Class 3, Grade 7. He is the best students in his class. His favorite subject is history. He like it because he thinks it is interesting. He gets up at half past 6 every day. Then he walks to school. He often eats bread and milk. He never eats vegetables. He seldom eats fruits. He does sports every week. I think he should eat more fruit and vegetables. They are good for health. He is good at playing basketball. He is a member of his school basketball club. His dream is to become s basketball player.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们介绍自己的网友Mike的情况，这一题材是我们平时接触比较多的，在教材中也有所体现。在介绍人物时，我们应主要从以下几个方面来着手，首先是他的姓名、年龄、外貌、年级等这些基本情况；其次是他的兴趣爱好；还有他的生活习惯、梦想等。题目中有非常清楚的提纲，我们可以根据这些内容提示，用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应主要使用一般现在时态、第三人称单数形式he来叙述，因此我们应特别注意每句话中谓语动词形式的变化。写作时，应使用一些较好的句型和短语，增强文章的表现力。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目要求给我们介绍了他的网友Mike的情况。首先这篇短文内容完整，层次清楚。短文里包含了题目要求的所有要点，没有遗漏。其次这篇短文使用了正确的时态和人称，尤其是谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化非常准确，符合英语的语法规范；另外，短文中也使用了一些好的句型和短语，这些句型的使用，使文章的意思更加连贯，表达也更流畅。例如，He is the best students in his class. His favorite subject is history、He like it because he thinks it is interesting、I think he should eat more fruit and vegetables. They are good for health、He is good at playing basketball等。

考点：提纲类作文。