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随着环境污染的加剧我市正在推广公共自行车，提倡人们“绿色出行，低碳生活”。现在某英文网站就此话题征文，请你根据短文后面的内容要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈不开车或少开车，进而推广公共自行车的好处。

内容要点可能要用到的词汇：

to live a low—carbon life,convenient to rent and return,too much traffic, too crowded, produce the dirty gases and pollute the environment.....

要求：1、短文必须包括所肉内容要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

2、80-100词，开头和结尾一给出，不计入总次数。

Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think it’s a good thing.

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I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low—carbon life.

Answer

Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think a it’s good thing. To live a low—carbon life, we should call on people to ride bikes instead of driving cars. First, bikes are much more convenient than cars and everyone can rent and return them. Second, as we know, there’s usually a heavy traffic when we are on the way to school or work. If fewer people ride bikes then there are fewer cars on the road, and there won’t be too crowded. Third, it’s the most important that riding bikes won’t produce the dirty air to make pollution to our environment. Let’s ride bikes instead of driving cars to protect the environment! And I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low—carbon life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，介绍自己对于低碳出行的看法。本题给出的材料较为详细，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所给材料内容，可知本文主要用第一人称表达观点，主要时态是一般现在时态 。写作中注意语言的表述应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。给出的要点都要写到文章中。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用first，second，third使层次清晰，使用的句式灵活多变。同时使用宾语从句，状语从句和主语从句等提升了整篇作文的档次，比起单纯使用简单句和并列句来说要好很多。充分体现了学以致用，不失为一篇上等作文。