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我国不少城市正在推广公共自行车，提倡人们“绿色出行，低碳生活”。现在某英文网站就此话题征文，请你参考下面的短文内容（不得照搬），再根据短文后面的内容要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈推广公共自行车的好处。

Nowadays, it is very important for us to live a low-carbon life．

The first thing we can do is riding bikes instead of driving cars．

Bikes are much cheaper than cars and everyone can afford it．

It’s easier to find the parking places for bikes．

The petrol is not necessary for bikes，so bikes won’t produce the dirty air to make pollution （污染）to our environment．

We can ride bikes to keep fit．

Let’s ride bikes instead of driving cars to protect the environment!

内容要点：

（1）首先，骑自行车出行方便，可以随时租还（rent and return）。

（2）其次，众所周知（as we know），在上学、上班时段交通特别繁忙（a heavy traffic）。

（3）如果有更多的人选择自行车，街道上就会有更少的汽车，也不会那么拥挤。

（4）最重要的是，骑自行车几乎不会带来污染，有助于保护环境。

要求：（1）短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，以便行文连贯；

（2）80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Answer

Now, public bikes are provided for people in many cities in China. I think a it’s good thing. To live a low—carbon life, we should call on people to ride bikes instead of driving cars. First, bikes are much more convenient than cars and everyone can rent and return them. Second, as we know, there’s usually a heavy traffic when we are on the way to school or work. If fewer people ride bikes then there are fewer cars on the road, and there won’t be too crowded. Third, it’s the most important that riding bikes won’t produce the dirty air to make pollution to our environment. Let’s ride bikes instead of driving cars to protect the environment! And I hope more and more people can ride bikes and live a low—carbon life.

【解析】

试题解析：

此题是提示性作文，要求根据提示及所给材料写一篇英语作文，主要考查写作能力，也是对英语综合知识运用的考查，这就要求仔细分析所给提示，不要漏掉提示要点，可适当发挥，写出语言流畅，意思连贯的文章。

【亮点说明】

这篇文章语言连贯，简洁明了。在文章中使用恰当的衔接词，为文章增色不少，同时也体现出作者的写作功底。例如：first，second，third，这样使文章层次分明，一目了然；同时还是用正确的比较级句型使文章的重点突出，如：If fewer people ride bikes then there are fewer cars on the road, and there won’t be too crowded.（如果更少的人选择骑自行车，汽车就会更少，街道也不会像现在这么拥挤）