Question

现如今，越来越多的动物濒临灭绝，请结合实际分析原因并至少提出两条合理化建议。以“Saving the animals”为题，写一篇不少于70词的英语短文.

Saving the Animals

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Answer

Saving the Animals

Do you know of any endangered animals? Why are they in danger? Many wild animals have already died out. And because of pollution and destroying forests, there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. If nothing is done, we may find ourselves alone on the earth. When farmers cut down trees, tigers and pandas can no longer hide, and we hunt, many tigers and pandas are killed by people. We should keep people from destroying forests, and encourage people to plant more trees.We should tell everyone animals are our friends. The government should shut down the factories which pollute rivers and air. If each of us does something, the world will be more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：本题属于话题类作文，话题是“Saving the Animals”， 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。写作时不要仅仅要包括要点，而且要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇如If nothing is done, we may find ourselves alone on the earth.（条件从句） When farmers cut down trees, tigers and pandas can no longer hide, and we hunt, many tigers and pandas are killed by people.（时间从句）。语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。

考点：考查话题类作文。