Question

情境作文

假如你是李梅，你的朋友肖华要去美国朋友Dave家做客，但他不知道应该注意什么，因此，他写信向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封回信，简要说明去美国朋友家做客的注意事项。

要点提示：1．买一件小礼物：

2．准时到达：

3．用餐时，赞扬菜的味道好：

4．别停留太久：

5．告别时说“谢谢”。

要求：1．短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥；

2. 80词左右（短文开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear Xiao Hua,

I'm very happy to hear from you.                                                  

Yours,

Li Mei

Answer

Dear Xiao Hua,

I'm very happy to hear from you. I’m also happy to hear that you are going to visit your American friends. When you visit your American friends, you’d better follow these things.

First, you are supposed to buy him a present o show your friendship. Second, you should get to his house on time. It’s impolite to be late. Third, during the dinner, you are accepted to say some words such as “It’s nice”, “very delicious” and “I like it very much.” Fourth, don’t stay too long. Finally, when the other guests leave after dinner, you had better say” Thank you for the dinner” and leave.

I hope you will have a nice time at your friend’s house.

Yours,

Li Mei

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，简要说明去美国朋友家做客的注意事项。结合所给材料，可知人称为第二人称，注意祈使句，被动句以及情态动词的交替使用。写作中注意短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥；注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了春节即将来临，接下来告诉自己的朋友肖华去美国朋友家做客的注意事项，提示的几个环节面面俱到。表达的非常完整。First，Second, Third, Fourth,的使用，使文章更具有条理性。最后向自己的朋友致以美好的祝愿：I hope you will have a nice time at your friend’s house.

考点：提纲类作文。