Question

书面表达

每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程，从幼稚走向成熟，从逆境走向成功,请你回忆一下你在成长过程中所经历的一次蜕变，把它写出来与我们一起分享，好吗？要求短文内容包含以下信息：1.变化前后分别是什么样子的？

2.促成你转变的主要原因是什么？

3.你为此变化而付出了怎样的努力？

4.谈谈你变化后的感受。

提示：1.字数要求在80-100词左右

2.短文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息

3.开头已给出不计入总数。

makes me change

I used to be

Answer

My mother’s diary makes me change

I used to be a naughty boy and my mother used to be angry with me. Now I’d like to say I’ve changed a lot. In fact, it is because of my mother’s diaries.

One day I saw my mother’s diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was curious and began to read my mother’s diaries. In her diaries, she showed her deep love for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. I couldn’t help crying after reading my mother’s diaries. Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I also try to understand my mother’s feelings.

I feel very proud of myself whenever I see the smile on my mother’s face.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。主要写其变化前后的样子、促成其转变的主要原因和其为此变化付出的努力。写过去用一般过去时，转变后的现在用一般现在时。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

亮点说明：本文结构紧凑 文中使用了非常好的短词为文章增色不少，首先是look for, try to do , see the smile on my mother’s face.等固定词组，其次还运用了she showed her deep love for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes.这些重点句型的运用给文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。