Question

书面表达

绿水青山才是金山银山，我们的家乡衢州经过“五水共治”后，天更蓝了，水更绿了，吸引了更多的外地游客来游玩。作为衢州的一员，我们该怎么做才能让家乡变得更美？请自拟题目写一篇有关衢州环境保护方面的短文（80词左右）。

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

Answer

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike instead of taking a car. We had better use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. We should use both sides of the paper when we write. Don’t use paper cups. At our school dinning room, use our own bowls and chopsticks instead of disposable ones. We can reuse the water and save the electricity. In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better. "There is only one earth", I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

【解析】

试题分析：是一篇利用信息提示写作的话题作文。要求根据信息提示，以环境保护为话题，写一篇短文。由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

写作亮点：本文要点明确，语言精练。层次分明。不同要点英语使用的句式也不一样。语言的表述符合语法的结构，复合句的使用，In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.起到画龙点睛的作用，想大家发出保护环境的倡议。

考点：话题类作文。