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良好的习惯成就美好的未来。作为青少年的我们，应该如何培养良好的习惯呢? 请根据以下内容提示，以“How to develop good habits”为题写一篇短文。

1. 上课认真听讲，做笔记（take notes）每天认真完成作业。

2. 闲暇时多读课外书。

3. 每周至少锻炼3至4次。

4. 多吃健康食品，少吃垃圾食品。

5. 适当补充一至两点好习惯，并谈谈它们对身心健康的影响。

要求：1.要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺逻辑连贯，不要逐字翻译。

2. 不少于60词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）

How to develop good habits

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Answer

One possible version：

How to develop good habits

It’s important to have a good habit As teenagers, what should we do? In my opinion, we should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes when necessary. It is a good habit to finish the homework on time every day. In spare time, we had better read some books to get more knowledge. Also, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food. It’s necessary for us to take exercise for three or four times a week. What’s more, to get enough sleep, go to bed early and don’t stay up late. Always remember to wash our hands before meals to keep clean. Exercise is fun and relaxing. It’s healthy for the mind and body. Healthy lifestyle helps us get good grades and live happily.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我们青少年应该如何培养良好的习惯。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It’s important to....，we should...，we had better...， Exercise is ...， Healthy lifestyle helps...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。注意完整的表达出所列内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了养成良好的习惯很重要，接下来介绍应养成什么好习惯，例如上课做笔记，多读书，多锻炼，多吃健康食品，最后强调健康的生活方式帮助我们生活快乐。此处in one’s opinion, take notes, on time, had better, take exercise, what’s more, go to bed, stay up late, remember to do sth, help sb do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。