Question

书面表达

请你以 A Trip to Wuxi为题写一篇短文，包括以下要点：（注意：词数80个字左右，请写在答卷纸上。）

1.上周末你和家人一起乘长途车去了无锡；

2.你们在那呆了两天；

3.第一天你们乘公交车去南禅寺(Nanchan Temple)，然后去锡惠公园(Xihui Park)，在那儿划船，爬山，吃午饭。饭后去太湖广场(Taihu Square)放风筝，看了著名的太湖风景，拍了许多照片；

4.第二天，你们步行去市中心购物，买了一些纪念品(souvenir)；

5.你们玩得很开心，不会忘了这次兴奋的旅行。

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Answer

A Trip to Wuxi

My family and I went to Wuxi by coach last weekend. We stayed there for two days. On the first day, we went to Nanchan Temple by bus, and then we went to Xihui Park. There, we went boating, climbed the hills and had lunch. After lunch, we went to Taihu Square to fly kites there. We watched the views of the famous Tai Lake and took many photos. On the second day, we went to the centre of the city on foot to go shopping. We bought some souvenirs. We enjoyed ourselves. We’ll never forget this exciting trip.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求以A trip to Wuxi为题写一篇短文。写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如Last week, my family and I took a bus to Wuxi. We stayed there for two days. On the first day we saw the famous Taihu Lake and visited some places of interest.一般现在时态、一般过去时态、一般将来时态的应用更使得短文表述更准确Wuxi is a beautiful city. Last week, my family and I took a bus to Wuxi. We won’t forget the meaningful experience.总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。

考点：提纲类作文。