Question

书面表达

最近，你班就“My hero”展开了一次调查。下表是调查结果， 请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。

学生比例	喜欢的名人	原因
30%	Spud Webb	1.多次遭拒，永不言弃； 2.通过努力证明高矮胖瘦不重要——只要不放弃，没有做不到的事。
22%	Tan Dun	1.有音乐天赋（举一例说明）； 2.成功融合东西方音乐，形成新的风格 ——音乐无界。
35%	Jackie Chan	1.其电影很特别（原因自拟）； 2.花费大量时间做慈善（举一例说明）。

注意：1. 词数100左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2. 短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

Recently we did a survey in our class about their heroes. Here’re the results.

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I think we should learn from these famous people.

Answer

Recently we did a survey in our class about their heroes. Here are the results.

30% of the students consider Spud Webb as their hero because he never gave up though he was refused many time. Through hard work, he proved that size and body type does not matter – you can do almost anything if you never give up.

22% of the students say Tan Dun is their hero because he has a real gift for music. He could make music with common objects like stones and paper when he was young./ He once made over 50 sound from water by controlling the speed of water flow. He has successfully mixed Chinese music and Western music together to make a new type – music without boundaries.

35% of us admire Jackie Chan most. We think his films are special because they successfully join humour and exciting action together. He also spends much time doing charity work. He has helped people not only in China but also in over 30 countries all over the world.

I think we should learn from these famous people.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and，以及固定短语如gave up等，还使用了一些固定句型如He also spends much time doing charity work. He has helped people not only in China but also in over 30 countries all over the world这些都为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。