Question

书面表达。

上周，你们班上召开了“校园节约，从我做起”的主题班会，大家讨论了校园里常见的浪费现象。请你针对这四种现象以班级名义写一份倡导书。

What we often see in our school: leave the water running after washing hands leave the lights on when leaving waste paper and other school things throw the food away after meals

要求：1. 词数60~80 左右；

2. 倡议书的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear teachers and schoolmates,

We are sorry to see so much waste in our school !___________________________________________

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Class 1 , Grade 9

Answer

Dear teachers and schoolmates,

We are sorry to see so much waste in our school! We students often leave the water running after washing hands, and leave lights on when leaving. In the classroom,we often see a lot of paper which is wasted. And some of us throw the waste paper and other school things here and there. At the dining hall, some students throw the food away after meals.

I think we should save water and electricity. We should make proper use of our school things.We should order what we need so that we can eat it up instead of throwing it away. Let’s try to have a good habit and save things around us. Let’s do these from now on.

Class 1 , Grade 9

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

考点：提纲作文