Question

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某英语报开展“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”征文比赛，请你根据表格中提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。词数80左右。

适当的压力 proper stress	认真学习，积极思考，及时复习, 容易通过考试
过重的压力 too heavy stress	无法入睡，非常疲倦，害怕考试，导致失败
应对的措施	为考试做好计划和准备，做锻炼，均衡饮食……

think actively, review our lessons in time, pass the exams easily, can’t sleep well, fear the exams, fail to pass the exams, plan and prepare well, enough exercise, a healthy diet

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.

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Answer

One possible version：

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides, it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily.
However, if we have too heavy stress, we can’t sleep well at night and we may feel too tired. We may fear the exams too much and fail in the end.

In my opinion, to deal with stress, we’d better plan and prepare well. We should also form some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we’ll feel relaxed and do well in the exams.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍如何解决考试带来的压力。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：A little bit of stress can be......；it can remind us to .....；if we have......及we’d better ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要用题目要求的提纲内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头考试带来的压力的好处，接下来介绍考试压力的不利之处，最后指出我们解决考试压力。此处用了remind us to，feel too tired，too heavy stress，in the end，form some good habits, do well in等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。