Question

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假如你是Andy，你的朋友Daniel下周要来张家港玩，请你向他介绍一下张家港这个城市。要点：

1.张家港位于苏州的北部，离苏州市中心大概七十公里；

2.是个居住的好地方；有很多事情可以做：……(至少3点)

3.我住在购物公园南面的一套公寓里；房前有个大花园，花草满地；每早在家里可听到鸟儿在歌唱。家人经常在阳台上聊天。爸爸每天开车载我上学；

4.到我家很容易。从购物公园西出口出来，沿着百桥路走，在第一个红绿灯处

右拐，然后过马路，大楼就在你的左边。我住在九楼。

5.盼望着你尽快来张家港玩。

词数：80词左右。

Dear Tommy:

I want to tell you something about my hometown.

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Welcome to Suzhou! Welcome to my home!

Best wishes !

Answer

Dear Tommy:

I want to tell you something about my hometown. Zhangjiagang city is in the north of Suzhou， about seventy kilometers away from Suzhou city center. It is a good place to live. There are a lot of things to do: You can do the shopping， you can eat lots of delicious food， and you can swim in the sea and so on. I just live in an apartment on the south side of the shopping park. There is a big garden in front of the house. Flowers and plants are everywhere. Every morning at home you can hear the birds sing. Family members often chat on the balcony. Dad drove me to school every day. Come to my home easily. Go out of the west exit of shopping park. Walk along the Bridge Road. Turn right at the first traffic lights. Then cross the road， the building is on your left. I live on the ninth floor. I am looking forward to you that you can come to Zhangjiagang to play as soon as possible.

Welcome to Suzhou! Welcome to my home!

Best wishes !

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，根据提示，确定文章的中心。注意人称和时态。尽量使用熟悉句型，使用简单句式，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的作文。注意人称和时态。文中使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如I just live in an apartment on the south side of the shopping park. There is a big garden in front of the house. Flowers and plants are everywhere. Every morning at home you can hear the birds sing.等，感叹问，祈使句，和简单句等句式使用，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有感染力。

考点：考查提纲类作文。