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最近，教育网就“孩子们参加课外补习课”的问题采访了一些家长。作为一名学生，你对此有何看法。请根据以下提示，给教育网的编辑写一篇英语短信。

父母们的观点	你的观点
1. 从小开始学习对孩子是有益的 2. 课外补习课能帮助孩子们进入一所好的大学 3. 希望自己的孩子成为个成功的人 4. ……	表示同意	培养学习兴趣，学到更多的学科知识，提高成绩，……
表示不同意	浪费时间，影响学习，加大压力，造成厌学，……

要求：1、以上观点必须写出，可以适当发挥；

2、就你的观点提出同意还是不同意，并就其中一个方面作出阐述；

3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

4、字数100左右（已给出的不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：get into； university； successful； person； be good for； a young age； important； cultivate (培养)； interest； more； gain (获取)； improve (提高)； waste； influence (影响)； pressure； hate； reduce (减少)； in my opinion

Dear Editor，

I have read the survey about “After-school classes for Children”. I know many parents suggest their children should take after-school classes.

Answer

Dear Editor，

I have read the survey about “After-school classes for Children”. I know many parents suggest their children should take after-school classes. Parents think it is good for children to learn from a young age. Parents think after-school classes cultivate children’s interest. Parents think after-school classes can help the children to get into a good university. They hope that their children can become a successful man. They are afraid that their children fall behind. Their children can gain more knowledge and improve grades through taking after-school classes. I don't agree with them. In my opinion I think taking after-school classes is a waste of time. It influences study and increase the pressure. It also makes students hate learning. So students shouldn’t take after-school classes.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，把提示内容要点写清：1.父母的观点；2.你是否同意父母的观点，说明原因。可适当发挥，文中内容要连贯。我们应运用正确的熟悉的英语句子写出怎样节的过程。使用给出的提示词和短语，尽量不要使用复杂的从句，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的作文。内容要点完整、应用词汇灵活准确，句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，上下文连贯。内容覆盖所有要点，表达了自己的观点；没有语言错误，字数符合要求。

考点：考查提纲类作文。