Question

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作为新时代的中学生，我们要懂礼仪、有公德、有爱心，有理想。你的同班同学李明就是这样的一个人，请你根据以下信息写一篇100字左右的短文介绍李明，并号召全校学生向他学习。

懂礼仪	遇见同学、老师问好，认为含食说话是粗鲁的。
有公德	总是排队等候，不插队；公共场所从不大声喧哗、乱丢垃圾；在公交车上主动给有需要的人让座。
有爱心	常参加慈善活动，是援助之手俱乐部成员；上学期组织了慈善演出， 并为贫困孩子捐献了衣服及其他物品。
有理想	梦想成为一名医生，理由……

My classmate

Li Ming is my classmate.

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We should learn from him.

Answer

My classmate

Liming is my classmate. He has good manners. He usually says “Hello” or “”Nice to meet you” when he meets the teachers and the classmates. He thinks it’s rude to talk with food in his mouth.

He always queues for his turn and never pushes in before others. He never makes too much noise in public， and he doesn’t drop litter everywhere. He always gives seats on the bus to the people in need.

He usually takes part in the charity activities. He is a member of the Helping Hand Club. He organized a charity show last term， and then he donated clothes and others things to the children in poor areas.

His dream is to be a doctor， because he is proud to help more people and improve their lives. I think we should learn from him.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头和结尾。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态、第三人称单数来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文多次使用连接词and以及频度副词，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。