Question

书面表达

越来越多的汽车进入了我们的家庭，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?

请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(100词左右)

内容提示：

1. 遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。

2. 别在街道或马路上玩耍和踢球。

3. 劝父母不能酒后驾车。

你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。

参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线

注：第一段已给出，不计入总词数 。

With more and more cars coming into our families， we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.________________________________________________________________________

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Answer

With more and more cars coming into our families， we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily， it has also brought many problems， such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.

Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example， we must walk on walk side， when we cross zebra-crossing， stop， look right and left， and then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road. we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive， not to run through red lights， not to talk and laugh while driving.

We can say cars are coming into our life， but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safely driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文主要是以日常生活事件为话题，内容要符合题意的要求，注意时态，人称，固定词组搭配。叙事要流畅，过度要自然，书写要工整。

写作亮点：本文提到很多不错的短语，如：look right and left，run through， heavy traffic，more and more等。用了较丰富的句型，如：时间状语从句、祈使句和宾语从句。还有unluckily， such as，for example，when， but等词的运用， 使文章过渡自然，叙事更加流畅、条理清晰，给文章增色不少。

考点：话题作文。