Question

书面表达

公共秩序，你我有责。假如你是阳光中学的张涛，请根据表格内容，描述不文明行为，并倡议同学们遵守公共秩序(obey public rules)，共创良好公共环境。

不良 行为	spit(吐痰)here and there play with public facilities (设备)
文明 行为	校内	图书馆：保持安静；及时归还图书。 食堂(canteen)：排队等候；不浪费食物。 教室：不在课桌上涂画；不追逐打闹。
校外	1． 马路上：…… 2． 公园里：……

要求：1. 所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，可适当发挥；

2. 自拟至少两点文明行为的倡议，不重复所给信息；

3. 文章不少于80词，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数:

4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，条理清楚，字迹工整；

5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。

My dear friends,

Each of us has the duty to obey public rules. Let’s say no to the bad behavior.

                                                                                  .

Finally. I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public places we will have.

Zhang Tao

Answer

My dear friends.

Each of us has the duty to obey public rules. Let's say no to the bad behaviour.

Now, we can still see some people spit here and there. Sometimes, naughty children play with public facilities. Besides, a few people say bad words at each other.

I think each of us should develop good behaviour. In the school library, we should keep quiet. We should also return the books in time. In the canteen, we should wait in line. We‘d better not waste any food. In the classroom, we mustn't write or draw on our desks. And it's dangerous to run after each other or fight with others.

We need to obey public rules outside the school as well. When we cross a road, please wait for the green light. While we are enjoying ourselves in the park, remember not to pick flowers or leave our waste things there.

Finally, I'd like to say, the more efforts we make, the better public place we will have.

Zhang Tao

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

考点：提纲作文