Question

书面表达

(注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不赋分) 你的朋友经常和父母吵架， 请你写一封信给他建议：

1. 如果是他遇 到问题，应该和父母谈谈，父母会乐意帮助他 2. 在家经常帮忙做做家务

3. 告诉 父母自己的喜好 4. 少玩电脑游戏

Dear Mike, I’m sorry to know that you often argue with your parents. Well , I think I can provide you with some advice.

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Answer

Love, Kevin

Dear Mike, I’m sorry to know that you often argue with your parents. Well , I think I can provide you with some

advice.

First, if you have some difficulties in doing sth, you should talk to your parents, your parents will be happy to help you. Second, you should often help your parents with housework at home. Third, you should tell your parents your own preferences. Fourth, you should play fewer computer games. and pay more attention to your study. I think you can get on well with your parents.

Love, Kevin

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求写一封信给你的朋友，送给他一些建议。首先，要认真审题，整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。不能漏掉所有的写作要点。然后，应利用规范的语言，流畅的语句，适当增加细节，对存在的问题如何去解决进行详细描述，最后简单进行总结。另外，还应尽可能地使用一些固定的句型及短语，以提高文章的得分等级。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。还使用了一些固定句型及短语，为文章增色不少，如have some difficulties in doing sth, pay more attention to ,get on well with等等。

考点：话题类作文。