Question

书面表达

假如你是 Millie， 上星期你们搬家后，  你有了属于自己的房间。请你用英语写一篇 80—100 词的短文介绍你的房间。短文开头已经给出，  但不计入总词数。

短文应包含以下要点，  可以适当发挥:

1. 房间是粉红色的，  使人感觉温暖;

2. 有一张大而舒适的床和一张书桌;

3. 书桌上有一台电脑，  可以在学习之后 

4. 你会打扫房间并保持房间整洁;

5. 你的房间是你学习和放松最好的地方，  你非常喜欢它。

I have a room of my own._____________________________________________________________

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Answer

I have a room of my own after I moved to our new house last week. My room is pink and it makes me feel warm because pink is my favorite color. There is a big bed and a desk in it. My bed is very comfortable. I often lie on it when I want to relax myself. On the desk， there is a computer. I can learn on it and I can also play games to relax after finishing my homework. Near the desk is my bookshelf. I have many kinds of books on it. I clean my room every day and I can keep it clean and tidy.

My room is the best place to study and relax. I love it very much.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇提纲作文。要求介绍一下自己的房间。短文要包含提纲要求的所有要点，并作适当发挥。要注意语言的选择及句型的运用，把简单的内容表达具体生动。短文用一般现在时态，第一、三人称进行表达。

写作亮点：本范文抓住了一个学生房间中的两大主件：床和书桌。先对床和书桌进行介绍，然后围绕着床和书桌介绍了房间中的其它东西。层次清楚，结构合理。短文夹叙夹议，在叙述中表达出了作者对小房间的浓浓的情感。中心突出，主题鲜明。

考点：考查提纲作文。