Question

书面表达

假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习座谈会”，请你根据表格所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

自己英语学习的情况	1.英语学习的目的
2.英语学习的方法
3.课外自学的途径
对学校英语教学的建议	(请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出至少2点建议)

注意:1.词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分已为你写好，不计入总词数;

2.短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺;

3.短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名。

Dear teachers and schoolmates. it's a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.

                                                                                        .

That's all. Thank you for your attention.

Answer

Dear teachers and schoolmates, it’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you. I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well. As everybody knows, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building. I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible. After class, I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio. Besides, I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

Now I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly, we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly, I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally, I suggest we have more English activities, such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for listening.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇材料作文，要求写一篇发言稿，材料以表格的形式给出，清晰明了，容易构思。作文主要从自己的情况和提出建议两方面着手，写作时，做到条理要清晰、语意连贯。范文使用第一人称，比较客观和礼貌。

写作亮点：范文使用了较多的短语，使文章内容充实，像share...with, be interested in, put ...to use, I'd like to, in order to等；范文还使用了it’s +形容词for sb to do句型，宾语从句what we’ve learned，suggest that (should) do句型等，显示出较强的语法功底。另外，范文注意句与句的衔接，使用了很多的连接词，像Naturally, As everybody knows, After class, Besides, Now等；用Firstly，Secondly，Finally表示列举，看起来很有条理。范文还使用了比喻句just like bricks in a building，把词汇比作砖瓦，给作文增色不少。

考点：提纲类作文。