Question

短文写作

马上要初中毕业了，假如你有机会负责组织你们班的“毕业派对”，你将会如何构思设计出一个充满创意、情感和品位的毕业庆祝活动呢？请写一篇80词以上的短文，介绍你的毕业派对计划。

    内容要求：1. 简介大致的构思；

              2. 分点列出活动流程；

              3. 小结活动的主要特色。

注    意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。

Answer

One possible version：

I have a plan for the party that divides into three parts. They’re Picture show, Talent show and Senior high message.

Part 1. Picture show

We bring some photos taken with our teachers or classmates and describe the photos with a good story about our school lives.

Part 2. Talent show

We can share our hobbies with our classmates. We can show what we can do in music, art or sport. We can also show other special abilities like playing magic and so on.

Part 3. Senior high message

Each of us prepares a big card, and then writes down a message for senior high on the card for each other. So every one can exchange the best wishes with his or her classmates.

In this party, all of us can share our wonderful experience in the past three years. We can present what they’ve learnt and how much progress we’ve made, too. And finally we may look forward to the future with lots of encouragement or advice.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍你的毕业派对计划。这是一个开放式的作文，可以自己够了派对活动内容。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一人称和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We can share...，Each of us prepares...，all of us can...，And finally we may look forward to ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的派对计划分成三部分，接下来介绍分成三段介绍这三部分：图片展示，才艺表演，初中留言，最后期望充满鼓励和建议的未来。此处divide into, share with,write down, exchange with, make progress, look forward to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。